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It won't help by =ilivelovett:iconilivelovett:

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It won’t help
Stop trying
I don’t wanna talk about it
If I did
I would
I lived in this hell for years
My own hell
Not yours
Stop trying to be a part of this
It’s my life
It’s my story
It’s my pain
That I live with
Don’t ask for any of this
Madness
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Author's Comments

I put this on dev art before but somehow it went into the scraps section. This is kinda about all the people that have come and gone out of my life.

Comments


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~bassqueen86 Jun 27, 2009, 9:32:34 AM
I really like this...very relatable.

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If you fall down enough, well soon enough you will find hell.
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~ForAllWhoHaveLoved Jun 27, 2009, 9:32:37 AM
I sorta get that.

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Verse is not written, it is bled; Out of the poet's abstract head. Words drip the poem on the page; Out of his grief, delight and rage.
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~Zeic Jun 27, 2009, 9:33:05 AM
thats not
a
good attitude

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I usually know the answers to the questions I ask, I just like hearing what you have to say.
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=ilivelovett Jun 27, 2009, 9:34:38 AM
Well I'm glad I could give you something to relate to. Thanks for reading and liking it.

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If life were an escalator I would be that person going up the down stairs.
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=ilivelovett Jun 27, 2009, 9:34:50 AM
Get what?

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If life were an escalator I would be that person going up the down stairs.
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=ilivelovett Jun 27, 2009, 9:35:39 AM
Well that's my life. If you don't like it, don't be a part of it. Easy as that.

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If life were an escalator I would be that person going up the down stairs.
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Mood: Joy ~roxasismylove Jun 27, 2009, 9:37:19 AM
I win the ever long arguement of who is better!! Mwahaha!! You lose! You're better!! Hahaha!!! This is a really nice one!

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Reaching as I fall
I know its already over now
Nothing left to lose
Red, 'Already Over'

:la:
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=ilivelovett Jun 27, 2009, 9:41:54 AM
Hahaha noo!!! I would prove you wrong but you haven't been posting all that many poems recently.

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If life were an escalator I would be that person going up the down stairs.
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~Zeic Jun 27, 2009, 9:45:10 AM
well yes
easy as that
for me
but for other
people
known people
much harder

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I usually know the answers to the questions I ask, I just like hearing what you have to say.
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=ilivelovett Jun 27, 2009, 9:51:45 AM
It's like this, I don't wanna hear some person give me pity. It pisses me off. I don't like talking about bad things that happen because I try to stay happy and optimistic, I don't like dwelling on bad things, call me crazy. I'm a happy person, I try very hard to keep it that way. I don't blame other people for crap that happened to me, I'm not gonna make some stupid excuse as to why I don't tell people things. I tell people I trust things when I need to because I'm on the verge of breaking down.

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If life were an escalator I would be that person going up the down stairs.
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